WRITING: THE RIGHT WORD CLARIFIES

WRITING:  THE RIGHT WORD CLARIFIES                               June 30, 2017 . . . And, Interchangeability Doesn’t Always Work   Can the following words be used interchangeably in writing? Because                      Since                            As In most cases I say no, but I encourage you to decide after considering (a) examples of usage and (b) the fact that at times only a particular word can convey utmost clarity in both writing and speaking. A certain sentence from Writestyle’s Grammar course can make you think hard about this: [Because/Since/As] Ann was fired, I’ve been doing her work. Which word is correct to open the sentence? Let’s see how each affects the sentence and its meaning. Because:  Refers ideally to reasoning and/or consequence:  Because I was fired [Event #1], I have no money to pay the rent [Event #2]. “Because” seems to hint at a direct relationship between the two events; at times, it could or could not be a direct relationship.  “Because” would be clear and correct in the following sentence: “Because Ann was fired, I have to do her work.” Since:  Refers ideally and most clearly to the passage of time:  I’ve had no appetite or energy since Dad died. At the same time, many people often say things like, “Since [Because] I’m sick, you can go in my place.” Is that wrong? Technically, no; but, as you, too, can tell, it isn’t as clear. As:  Often refers ideally to an event AS it was happening:  A customer showed up just as I was locking the store for the night.  As I looked at the photo, I realized how much Joe looks like Dad. Note that in those last two examples, you could use “while” instead of “as” because both indicate an event in motion. In recent years, “as” has often been used incorrectly to indicate reasoning/consequence, which sets my teeth on edge, to say the least. It’s annoyingly wrong and unclear: As I was done, I went home. Clear correction: Because [reasoning] I was done [finished], I went home. When you consider the above explanations and examples, you likely can understand that communications are truly clear when “because,” “since,” and “as” are used for their respective purposes. Ideally, they should not be used interchangeably, especially when clarity could be questioned. Many people use them interchangeably and some educators accept the practice, which can cause confusion regarding the intent of some sentences. Thinking of your readers and establishing clarity for them is such a courtesy that prevents confusion and saves time. In the...

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 30, 2017

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 30, 2017   Sometimes-pro Karina Smirnoff was at the Millennium Dance Sport Championships in Orlando this week. I like to see her back on Dancing With The Stars now and then. Judge Bruno Tonioli has been in London; says it’s hot there. It seems that Val and Jenna, too, are vacationing in Europe this week. Maks and Peta had lots of fun on their first father’s day with baby Shai. Peta says that Maks is the best dad and that they love their family sweat/workout sessions together. Reminder: They’ll get married next Saturday! Derek has been in Nantucket, RI this week and lovin’ it. He’ll have plenty to do at sister Julianne’s wedding next Saturday. One of Gleb and Elena’s favorite places is a horse farm in Sydney, Australia. She’s 34 weeks pregnant; so, probably due in July. On Tues., June 27, host Tom Bergeron visited the Hot Summer Nights pros on tour in NYC. Surprise! You can review the team’s tour schedule at our June 21 post. Judge Carrie Ann Inaba and her love, Robb Derringer, have been enjoying NYC this week. Today, she filled in for Kelly Ripa, co-hosting with Ryan Seacrest. Of course, her high-pitched giggle often rang out in the studio.   Before we know it, the pros will be back in the studio rehearsing with newly assigned celebs. I’ll pass along news of them and their celebs whenever I have it over the next several weeks. If you have ideas for DWTS topics on this blog or suggestions for how I can make blog posts easier to read, especially during fall and spring seasons, be sure to let me know. Note that, last season, I added the remaining dances that each celebrity could be called upon to do; that helped us to keep track of performances. I’ll keep doing my best for all of us. Stay tuned!            ...

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 27, 2017

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 27, 2017   New EP NOW Available!:  Yesterday was the widely advertised day that the new EP by Dancing with the Stars pro Mark Ballas and his wife BC Jean (Alexander Jean), titled “High Enough,” was supposed to be available, but whenever I checked on Amazon and BestBuy.com under Mark’s name it was not shown. I’d thought it would be listed under both of their names; guess I should have checked hers, too. Today, www.alexanderjean.net says IT’S OUT! You can also have a quick listen there, check their tour schedule for your city, and buy your tickets to see them in concert with R5. Here’s the rest of their tour schedule, as shown on that site: June 27          Saint Andrews Hall                                       Detroit, MI          TODAY! June 28          The Phoenix Concert Theatre                      Toronto, CAN June 30          Paradise Rock Club                                     Boston, MA July 2              Theatre of Living Arts                                   Philadelphia, PA July 4              Baltimore Soundstage                                 Baltimore, MD July 5              The Underground                                          Charlotte, NC July 7              The Loft                                                          Atlanta, GA July 10            White Oak Music Hall                                   Houston, TX July 11            “Trees”                                                            Dallas, TX July 12            “Parish”                                                          Austin, TX   Reminder:  You can see Mark’s buddy Derek Hough every Tuesday this summer on “World of Dance with JLo and Ne-Yo, 10 p.m., NBC, right after “America’s Got Talent.” Keep your dance on!  More very soon . . .  ...

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 26, 2017

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 26, 2017 New EP:  Today’s the day! The new EP by Dancing with the Stars pro Mark Ballas and his wife BC Jean are supposed to be FOR SALE! You might also want to find tickets to see them in concert with R5! Erin Andrews:  Word is that co-host Erin married her fiancé Jarret Stoll, NHL player, last Saturday, June 24, in Montana. I’ll bet that was a gorgeous setting. Congrats, Erin! Wish Lists:  Have you thought about which pros you want to see during the upcoming Dancing with the Stars fall season and which celebs you’d love to see on the floor with them? It can be a really short list, if you want. It can be celebs from past TV shows, current TV shows, and even movies. Let’s talk about these people and what would make them good dance contestants. Other topics:  What else would you like to talk about regarding Dancing with the Stars besides pros and celebs? Costumes? How eliminations are conducted? The newer show format of one night (just Monday) versus the old format of two nights (Monday and Tuesday)? Whatever it is, put it out there and we’ll have fun with it.   Get your dance on and keep it on!  More very soon . ....

Dancing with the Stars NEWS, Post-Season 24: June 21, 2017

DANCING WITH THE STARS, POST-SEASON 24: June 21, 2017 Hi, again, DWTS fans! I have some news and reminders for you. New Baby:  Last Sunday, Father’s Day, former DWTS pro Edyta Sliwinska presented her husband and former DWTS pro Alec Mazo with their second child. A daughter this time: Leia Josephine. The first, three years ago, was son Michael Alexander, who chose the name for his baby sister. Happy family! “Health Magazine”:  Dancing with the Stars Co-Host Erin Andrews is on the cover of the July/August 2017 issue, looking extremely fit and happy. No wonder! The 39-year-old has come out on the bright side of cervical cancer, she’s marrying the love of her life this summer, and she may be able to have a baby, after all, because she froze some of her eggs before receiving her cancer diagnosis last year. Go, Erin! “Little Big Shots”:  A recent episode of “Little Big Shots,” hosted by Steve Harvey, featured a couple of juvenile ballroom-dance experts from Italy who have danced together for some years. And they’re not even 10 years old!  The girl’s 8 and the boy’s 9. Fantastic and so cute! You may want to find a replay. New EP:  Mark your calendar for June 26! That’s when the new EP by Dancing with the Stars pro Mark Ballas and his wife BC Jean (Alexander Jean) will hit shelves and air! Also, contact your local entertainment venues for tickets if you want to see them in concert with R5! “World of Dance”:  If you love dance in many different forms, you’ll LOVE this show. Dancing with the Stars pro Derek Hough is a judge alongside WoD producer Jennifer Lopez and Ne-Yo. 10 p.m., on NBC, right after “America’s Got Talent.”   Weddings: This summer: (1) Peta Murgatroyd and Maksim Chmerkovskiy on July 8. (2) Julianne Hough and Brooks Laich, the center pro hockey man for Canada’s Washington Capitals, on July 8. (3) Erin Andrews and NHL free agent Jarret Stoll (date undisclosed). (4) Carrie Ann Inaba and actor Robb Derringer (date undisclosed). Within the next 12 months?:  Emma Slater and Sasha Farber may wait until next year; Emma said that because so many others are tying the knot this summer, she wants to wait and stand out.   David Ross:  Don’t forget David’s book, which landed a month ago: “Teammate: My Journey in Baseball and a World Series for the Ages.” Available on Amazon.com and probably other large mainstream sources.   Dancing With The Stars Live! Hot Summer Nights...

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